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Omega Complex

Exiled_Vizir

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  1. 1. What type of presentation do you prefer for this story?

    • Comics style (1st part)
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    • Transcript style (2nd part)
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    • Both: basically comics when there are a lot of visual change, transcript for big series of dialogues with small changes in the visual set up.
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Pre-scriptum: the entire chapter is here

File: Vizir42b27-suspect-Activity-Indigo_Level

Transcriptor: James De Bond

Date: 15.07Y248

Thought of the day: There is no innocence, only low level of guilt (Troubleshooter John A Tatanga)

Speedy Decision maker Sum-Up: this file is a report about the highly suspicious citizen Iznogood Vizir latest activity. You will also find a poll about the format of next reports.

We intercept some days ago an electronic communication between the badly known citizen Iznogood Vizir and a classified individual an other complex named Omega. This complex would sentient AI driven like the Alpha Complex (more info in the link). As alway with Vizir this delirium is illustrated with picture or even video and sound which be convincing for someone who doesn't know this shady character; nevertheless this time our services captured a spy some day ago who said coming from this very complex and his description was in line with Vizir's infos. So I make this file in case the threat would be real. The idea with this first draft is to show the 2 kinds of documents we got so far, after you had consult them, don't hesitate to vote in the associate poll to tell if you prefer if we arrange all as the first type (a comics/manga style from the ancient world) or the second (a transcript) or both and use the most adapted to the situation.

All the documents from Vizir seems to evolve around an entity named Task Force T28A-ECS:

- The first serie is a somewhat recruitment session:

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As you already spotted the transcriptor of this doc is someone called "Exiled_Vizir", it is remarquable but we don't the relation of this person with Iznogood Vizir.

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The next serie of documents is the follow-up of this interview, but now the style is a sort of transcript:

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Natasha: - It’s ok, I tend to be a little over excited when I’m stressed…

Sgt Misty Redstorm: - One thing you have to know before we start, is that this assignment has a high level of clearance: something like yellow or green…

Natasha: - Oh! So it means forgetfulness treatment if I heared of it and don’t take it ?

Misty: - Exactly, that’s why I will ask you some question and try to present you the most important characteristics for you, but without revealing any secrets. So if you don’t take it, no forgetfulness treatment. Is it ok for you?

Natasha: - Yes, that very nice of you!

Misty: - Ok, I know you’ve done a thesis in genetic, and generally people with your profile don’t take Spec-Op type assignment. So why are you interested?

Natasha: - Oh… That… It’s because when I presented it the council thought it was false… Since the technical part, experimentation, etc was done well they only validate it.

Misty: - Oh, sorry to hear that.

Natasha: - Yeah, so no honors or else… So the assignments in genetic I got are not very interesting… But I was very curious about yours, you know Spec-Op and all and also why me?

Misty: - I see. The “why you?” is simple: we read your thesis, our specialist in genetic found your experiments and conclusion very well done. And we observe your hypothesis on our field statistics.

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Natasha : - Really?! That’s amazing! No kidding?

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Misty: - Yes, really. But the problem is that we are not a lab, so you will consulted for genetic in general or your thesis related things but the main job will actions, training a lot and hard and investigations. And the job is dangerous, very. More than 75% peoples who quit don’t need to do any forgetfulness treatments…

Natasha : - That’s a good thing, no?

Misty: - Hm, let me rephrase it: they don’t need it because they deceased in a no clonable way or with no clone left…

Natasha: - Oh…

Misty: - So I understand completely if you don’t want to take the risk.

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Natasha: - Huh, that’s a tough choice… But the others assignments sucks, and it’s the only I can challenge my thesis...

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Natasha: - Ok! Let’s do it!

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Misty: - You’re sure?

Natasha: - Yes!

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Misty: - Ok, here is your contract, sign it if it’s ok for you.

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Natasha: - A paper contract? Really!?

Misty: - Yeah, the mainframe don’t trust electronic signing… Go figure.

 

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Morius

I think comics is the way to go!

That said, I noticed a transcription is very usefull for people who strugle with English, because they can copy the text and past them on a translator!

 

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Exiled_Vizir
8 hours ago, Morius said:

I think comics is the way to go!

That said, I noticed a transcription is very usefull for people who strugle with English, because they can copy the text and past them on a translator!

 

Hi, thanks for that detailed opinion and to be honest I haven't thought about using a translator it's a very good observation. My reasoning was more: there are phases of a story which doesn't exploit the visual advantage of a comics, by example the beginning of this story is good for a comics, Natacha yielled, Misty is waken up surprised, etc. It's fast dialogues, lots of facial changes, the comics is better for that. But for the 2nd part it is more relax, slow, for me plain text with some images do the trick. And also I'm lazy and one image with a lot of text is simpler for me^^

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Anyway for people which want to use a translator, I can share the script file I wrote so they will not have to write all the sentences in the translator, just copy/paste.

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Morius
5 hours ago, Exiled_Vizir said:

Hi, thanks for that detailed opinion and to be honest I haven't thought about using a translator it's a very good observation. My reasoning was more: there are phases of a story which doesn't exploit the visual advantage of a comics, by example the beginning of this story is good for a comics, Natacha yielled, Misty is waken up surprised, etc. It's fast dialogues, lots of facial changes, the comics is better for that. But for the 2nd part it is more relax, slow, for me plain text with some images do the trick. And also I'm lazy and one image with a lot of text is simpler for me^^

You may resource to text-only pannels on these cases. This tool was very common on 80's comics, and I love them! lol.

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22 hours ago, Morius said:

You may resource to text-only pannels on these cases. This tool was very common on 80's comics, and I love them! lol.

Yes it's an option, I have to find a way to make an old Unix/TS-235 style for them

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