nandosuave86

Bee's beauty is timeless! It's not so much that she's got a bangin' ass body, her face is absolute perfection. You can clearly see she's of mixed race, because her features span both Negro and Caucasian details. Her eyes are what get me. A brown skinned girl with natural blue eyes? Hank's a lucky sum'bitch, but he knows that already.

This one delivered BIG time. You weren't joking when you said the Revelations arch would be the most pivotal story telling you've done to date. This one was packed full of emotion and showed how high the stakes are truly going forward.

This was easily the most gripping and grittiest entry to the series to date. We get a glimpse into what makes Herrig, see him destroy cartel members like paper bags, and witness the moment that made the hero become the villain. Of all of your tragic characters, his story is the most tragic of them all, because his experiences in life turned him from a national hero to the harbinger of war. It's heartbreaking to see even with all he's done, there's still empathy in him. He's not a complete monster, and his hate for the system is actually justified in a sick, twisted way. This was an emotional and thought provoking tale.

I'm loving the direction the story is heading now. It really does feel like the closing of a chapter and the start of somethin new. You mentioned in your blog that you're going to start focusing on the other characters outside of the "core 4", but the story that's developing with them could carry it's own separate series. I'm definitely with the others in having a vested interest in the Rory situation. Learning of his history is going to be a wild one since he's clearly a tragic character. And of course speaking of tragic characters, the Luke portion was top notch. Kate is a damned dynamo and excellently written for her obvious role. If the next couple Luke focused volumes deliver the way the final scene did, we're in for a treat.

This was definitely one of the most important volumes in the early going, I can tell. It set the stage for a lot of what's taken place, and also introduced us to Lori Stiel and James Sullivan, kicking off their stories as well. The final few pages are pure money. Definitely not for everyone, but I'm not everyone. I'm down for the freaky shit. Another fine entry.

So yea, I'm going back and reading all of the stuff you posted before I had joined the forum, and MAN seeing where things started compared to where they are now in the story is a treat. This one is a lot shorter than later volumes, but the depth of the story is no less impactful. Also, seeing how vastly you've improved at your craft in 3 years is also a pleasant experience. There's typos, but not enough for me to lesson my rating below 5 stars, you were still pretty new at this back then. I'm invested in all of your stories, but TLWL is the one that interests me most cuz it hits so close to home with being in relationships in the big city. Time for me to start the next volume, Sarge.