Loop animation in Ren'py game

[FJMorrys]

Hey there, I need your opinion on the loop image animation (I only used around 43 images to create this loop) that I would like to use in my game. I just wanted to know if this loop looks good enough to you, or if I should try to make it look a little smoother or perhaps longer..

 

 

 

[HDiddy]

Looks smoother than most loops I see in Renpy games.

[HDiddy]

Speaking of games...I hope you are not using that same, tired, annoying looking default male everyone seems to use for the MC.   Please spend some time making the male model look at least half way decent

[FJMorrys]

1 minute ago, HDiddy said:

Speaking of games...I hope you are not using that same, tired, annoying looking default male everyone seems to use for the MC.   Please spend some time making the male model look at least half way decent

She is the main character. 

But yeah, making a semi-decent-looking male is the toughest part for me. Here are some screens of males I'm currently using, but I'm really struggling with creating some decent-looking ones.