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Stiel Maiden Vol. 11 - Revelations Part 2

Stiel Maiden Vol. 11 - Revelations Part 2

A moment that will change the world...

 

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nandosuave86

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Aight, finally finished reading and DAMN that was powerful statement of a story. It's clearly building to a gritty and gut wrenching climax to this little mini-series and I've gotta tell you I'm gonna miss Johnny Stiel when he's gone. Dude is an awesome, intricate and interesting character. He's only been in 2 volumes and I want to see for of him. But I guess the intention was to make him seem large than life to emphasize the impact his impending demise has on the overarching story. Job well done in that regard.

As for the added reveals in this volume, damn. Everything about this volume was well crafted, emotionally charged and sets up the finale beautifully. This one volume raises the bar of the story, and raises the bar of your overall storytelling as well. I'm gonna agree with a comment @Rob_Rebel89 made that it's criminal more people aren't reading and giving feedback to this, because it's some of the best story telling I've ready anywhere. And the fact that you're doing this for free basically is nuts. You could be making money on Patreon for this level of quality. Don't go getting ideas though lol.

Revelations part 3 is going to be intense, I can see it.

Response from the author:

You've got nothing to worry about, Nando. Though I have been actively looking for other platforms to share my work, Patreon isn't one of them. I don't knock anyone who goes that route, but IMHO when money becomes involved...it becomes more about putting out high volume rather than high quality. I'm still finding my niche as far as format goes. I know I can still improve in some aspect in terms of my presentation. (Example, blood effects. Still trying to figure out how to make it look more realistic.)

As far as getting eyes on my work, I've resigned myself to the fact not everyone will read it. 90% of this community are focused on whacking off to virtual porn. That's not a knock on anyone, that's fact. So the idea that I'm telling stories where sex is additive to them and not the core focus of them...when this forum is primarily focused on sexual content...puts me at a disadvantage as far as reader base. It is what it is.

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Trapp

  

What else can I add that the others have not yet? Stiel Maiden is my favorite comic book of all time. Super hero shit doesn't even come close to this, and I love that we get such a great tragic character comparable to Master Miller of Metal Gear fame. Also, the social commentary and reflections on conflict and war are very much appreciated, as well as ripe for analysis. This shit keeps getting better and better as time goes by, and I only hope to see it to its conclusion, whatever it may be. Best content of yours BY FAR.

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Well...the conclusion of the Revelations arch only opens up even more story elements. There's some things about to happen in the immediate right after part 3 that's going to SERIOUSLY blow everyone's mind. I've got some gooooooooooooooooooood stuff planned 

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Rob_Rebel89

  

👏👏👏 This right here has to be one of the most powerful entries into the story to date. As I said in a comment, it's gut wrenching knowing that something is clearly about to happen that sets the stage for the present day conflict, and that it's ultimately going to lead to the death of Johnny Stiel. You've made his such an interesting and nuanced character, and only added even more depth to him in this volume delving into his spiritual beliefs. Knowing that he's ultimately the catalyst for things to come is heartbreaking. Especially seeing how things have progressed between him and Susan in the year+ between the last volume and this one.

And as far as Jericho, well done is all I have to say. I won't spoil anything in this review, but damn. Revelations Part 3 is going to be a gut punch, I know it. And I'm ready for it. 

Response from the author:

I was planning on putting out a couple of side stories, some more humorous/erotic stuff before delving into part 3, but I maybe be tempted to just roll it out. Suffice to say it is THE most pivotal moment of the entire series so far, and the aftermath of it will change the dynamic for a number of characters. Even still, there's even MORE reveals to come in future volumes that are going blow your mind. Trust me, I'm not done with the shocking surprises one bit.

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